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writetomyheart2014-11-04 03:12 pm
jojibear.livejournal.com) wrote in writetomyheart2014-11-04 03:12 pm
[Team One] And Rain Will Make the Flowers Grow
"I'll write fluffy Neo!" she said.
And then proceeded to write this...
I am so sorry u_u
This one's for you two,![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
yeolbear and risakochan.
/gently pokesedae.
Here, have a bonus: a photo of my handwritten draft.
And then proceeded to write this...
I am so sorry u_u
This one's for you two,
yeolbear and risakochan.This isn't how it's supposed to end, Hakyeon thinks as he watches Taekwoon bleed out all over the granite floor of the derelict warehouse, surrounded by onlookers but none of them stepping in to staunch the blood flowing from the bullet wound in Taekwoon's stomach.
He would, if he could, but he can't, far away and incorporeal as he is. All he can do is watch from his perch, here, high up in the heavens. So instead he weeps, his tears manifesting as rain that falls in soft sheets over the people down below.
Down below, he sees Taekwoon raise a hand weakly, his palm turned out, as if he were trying to catch the raindrops. And then Taekwoon smiles, his eyes slowly fluttering shut as the edges of his lips quirk just that slightest bit.
"What are you smiling about, you silly man?" Hakyeon asks softly, to no-one in particular. "You're dying, but you're so at peace with that, and all you're doing is trying to catch the rain and smile."
"Because I knew I'd be seeing you again soon," answers an all too familiar voice from behind him.
He would, if he could, but he can't, far away and incorporeal as he is. All he can do is watch from his perch, here, high up in the heavens. So instead he weeps, his tears manifesting as rain that falls in soft sheets over the people down below.
Down below, he sees Taekwoon raise a hand weakly, his palm turned out, as if he were trying to catch the raindrops. And then Taekwoon smiles, his eyes slowly fluttering shut as the edges of his lips quirk just that slightest bit.
"What are you smiling about, you silly man?" Hakyeon asks softly, to no-one in particular. "You're dying, but you're so at peace with that, and all you're doing is trying to catch the rain and smile."
"Because I knew I'd be seeing you again soon," answers an all too familiar voice from behind him.
/gently pokes
edae.Here, have a bonus: a photo of my handwritten draft.
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(But you saved yourself with the ending. Otherwise I would have thrown stuff at you. A lot of stuff.)
The way you wrote that scene... Taekwoon smiling... /starts crying again
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