http://orangegreenlove.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] orangegreenlove.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] writetomyheart2015-03-13 02:29 pm

[Team Sonic] Glitter

Starting words from here!

“Anything for you,” Hokuto replied honestly.

The light was catching Fuma's nipple rings in interesting ways, but Hokuto did his best to listen to the older stripper's words. “And that guy's got a thing for me, he tips reaaally well, which means I need to get on stage right now. Can you teach the new guy instead, Hokku?”

There wasn't a lot Hokuto wouldn't do if Fuma asked him, and the new guy, Jesse, had seemed nice enough the few times Hokuto had talked to him. “Sure, I'll do it.”

Fuma gave him a blinding smile. “Thanks! I'll owe you. Explain the rules of lap dances to the new kid and maybe give him a few pointers.” With that settled, Fuma sauntered over to the low, round stage near which his latest favourite customer, a rich, friendly guy called Nakajima, was sitting. If Fuma so much as smiled at Nakajima while he stripped, he earned more in tips from this one customer than he usually made in three nights.

With an effort, Hokuto dragged his eyes away from Fuma’s ass and went to find the new guy. When he did find Jesse, the corners of Hokuto’s lips twitched up into a smile. This would definitely be more fun than expected - Jesse was wearing leather pants that were so tight Hokuto was sure Jesse would need help to take them off again. Not exactly ideal for stripping, but that just meant it was one more thing he could teach him.

“Nice pants.”

Jesse turned at the words. His eyebrows rose and his eyes wandered up and down Hokuto’s naked legs before he replied. “Nice lack of pants.”
bluedreaming: digital art of a person overlaid with blue, with ace-aro-agender buttons (nana red lips)

[personal profile] bluedreaming 2015-03-13 04:55 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm sorry ;; I realized I forgot to leave a comment >.< that LAST LINE blew me COMPLETELY away so I'm blaming YOU for losing the presence of mind to comment
Edited 2015-03-13 16:56 (UTC)
bluedreaming: digital art of a person overlaid with blue, with ace-aro-agender buttons (nana red lips)

[personal profile] bluedreaming 2015-03-13 05:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Yet another reason to like Hokuto ♡
bluedreaming: digital art of a person overlaid with blue, with ace-aro-agender buttons (nana red lips)

[personal profile] bluedreaming 2015-03-13 05:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Nice legs are all I ask of life
bluedreaming: digital art of a person overlaid with blue, with ace-aro-agender buttons (nana red lips)

[personal profile] bluedreaming 2015-03-13 05:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Begs you to write frottage
bluedreaming: digital art of a person overlaid with blue, with ace-aro-agender buttons (nana red lips)

[personal profile] bluedreaming 2015-03-13 05:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Aww ;; but I can understand

Hmm im trying to think of something - what would be easier?
bluedreaming: digital art of a person overlaid with blue, with ace-aro-agender buttons (nana red lips)

[personal profile] bluedreaming 2015-03-14 09:28 am (UTC)(link)
THANK YOU FOR THAT IDEA

[identity profile] su-jin.livejournal.com 2015-03-13 06:20 pm (UTC)(link)
*drools* awesome setting! Oh my, new stripper Jesse sounds really erotic~ I mean tight leather pants 0.0 And Hokuto's love for being pantsless XDD

And Fuma's nipple rings *w* hot~~ FumaKen is such a lovely pairing~~ ^_^

[identity profile] dori-liv.livejournal.com 2015-03-13 10:58 pm (UTC)(link)
I may be completely wrong here, but is this a continuation of something else you wrote? Something with some one gettig their nipple pierced. :\ I've a very poor memory and it feels like forever ago that I read that, but this just made me think of it.

[identity profile] dori-liv.livejournal.com 2015-03-13 11:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Yes, thats the one! Honestly I wasn't even sure you were the one who wrote it, so I'm giving myself brownie points for that anyway xD

[identity profile] dori-liv.livejournal.com 2015-03-13 11:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Lol, yeah even though I may not know how to comment without feeling pervy I READ ALL THE PORN!!
Omg, my memory is such a fail. But occasionally I remember little scraps of things that I cant quite but together xD

Wish I could help with your nipple needs but I'm lacking in nipple writing experience and I don't know Fuma. I appreciate the highly relevant icon use though :Db

[identity profile] dori-liv.livejournal.com 2015-03-13 11:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Well now I'm curious, can you recognise nipples? Or do you have to label them? Do you have '[insert name] nipples' folders?

[identity profile] dori-liv.livejournal.com 2015-03-13 11:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Well that shit's just impressive

also makes it sound like your butt has mad skills

[identity profile] dori-liv.livejournal.com 2015-03-14 09:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Well that shit's just impressive

also makes it sound like your butt has mad skills

[identity profile] mousapelli.livejournal.com 2015-03-13 11:21 pm (UTC)(link)
well of course hokku isn't wearing any pants! that's why he's so good at this job.

[identity profile] thesecretdoor.livejournal.com 2015-03-14 07:16 am (UTC)(link)
Ok, so I came here to comment but mousapelli took the words right out of my mouth >_<

Hokku should always be pantless!

[identity profile] rin-aokuro.livejournal.com 2015-03-14 08:01 am (UTC)(link)
Omg the ending. It's absolutely perfect! :D ♥ Also I really like this hint of a Thing that Fuma and Hokuto seem to have there. ♥