http://elindar.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] elindar.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] writetomyheart2015-07-27 07:27 pm

[team one] shadows

...i'm late, i'm sorry >_< this is short and pointless, idek where i was going with this. ah well. but they're vampires! this particular trio because of the star1 shoot.



Weapons into instruments reads on the crumbled concrete wall, sprayed over other messy graffitis. The factory building is old and long abandoned, standing alone in the outskirts of the city, at the mercy of the nature and weather. That's why it is a great place to stay at.

The sun has just sunk behind the treetops and dimness is spreading around when a lonely figure appears from the woods, like a shadow, and makes its way through the long grass and wild flowers towards the building. The comer is dressed in all black, a long coat and a wide brim hat, and is humming softly to himself as he goes, his steps light and bouncy among crumbled wreck and shattered glass.

There is another figure, standing by a broken window up on the seventh floor, following the comer with his eyes. He faintly hears the other opening the door down below, and after a minute or two, the humming and approaching steps echo in the staircase behind him. He turns around when he hears a soft "hyung!" and gives the other a quick once-over before returning his gaze to the darkening sky outside.

"Everything fine?" Jongdae asks when he comes to stand next to him.

"I was going to ask you the same," Junmyeon says.

"Oh? I'm great!"

"That's good. You just were gone for five days."

"...It's been that long?" Jongdae sounds incredulous but then lets out a quick laugh. "I always lose the track of time, the city's so much fun."

Junmyeon doesn't miss the way the other licks his lips and only barely suppresses an eye roll.

"Have you been here the whole time, hyung?"

"Mostly," Junmyeon says curtly.

"What about Baekhyun?" Jongdae then asks carefully and that makes Junmyeon sigh. He jerks his chin up towards the ceiling.


They walk two floors up and step outside on the roof. The night has properly fallen now, the building and surrounding forest wrapped in warm darkness. Farther beyond the trees shine the lights of the city but they're far enough to not fade out the stars above their heads.

There, sprawled out on the edge of the roof lies a third figure, hands tucked behind his head and staring at the night sky above. He doesn't move when Junmyeon and Jongdae make their way to him through the dark roof, not even when Jongdae sneers incredulously.

"Do you move at all? You’re on the same spot as when I left days ago."

Junmyeon's elbow in his rib shuts Jongdae up and he settles for stuffing his hands into his pockets and huffs.

Baekhyun heaves a sigh and sits up eventually, watching the gloving city lights in the distance. "It's so dull. Everything's dull."

"Well, you should try going to the city for a change," Jongdae grins. "Entertainment guaranteed. Go out and live a little... Oh. Well, you know what I mean."

Baekhyun glances at Jongdae and gives him something that is almost a smile. "Thanks but no thanks."

He lies back down and closes his eyes, clearly done with the conversation. Jongdae isn't, though.

"Are you just going to mope around until the end of time or what? I never thought that you out of all would end up being so miserably heartbroken over a—, OWW."

Junmyeon's elbow hits him again, hard, and Jongdae winces.

"Hyung—"

"Enough."

"But he's just withering away in here, slowly starving himself even," the annoyance and concern are clear in Jongdae's voice.

He turns and looks down at Baekhyun, who silently meets his gaze. At other times, Baekhyun would laugh at Jongdae in turn, call him an idiot and tell him to stop worrying and mind his own business. But now, he says nothing, because there's nothing to say.

"Why?" Jongdae asks in a small voice. He feels Junmyeon's hand on his shoulder, a light squeeze that's maybe trying to be reassuring.

This time Baekhyun really smiles at him, but it's a smile full of sadness.

"Because I'm an idiot with a broken heart."



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[identity profile] damagea.livejournal.com 2015-07-27 04:58 pm (UTC)(link)
I AM SHAKING HERE BECAUSE THIS IS JUST SO FUCKING PERFECT. I seriously have no words left, I want to say everything but I can'ttt!!! So sorry that this comment is going to suck in a big time but I'll try my best. T________T I haven't been into vampire fics that long (actually one specific Eunhae fic made me like them...) but THIS IS PERFECT AND NOW I NEED MORE OF THIS??? This left so many questions in my head. ABOUT CHEN'S ADVENTURES IN A CITY. WHAT HAPPENED TO THEM IN THE FIRST PLACE? HOW DID THEY GET TO KNOW EACH OTHER? WHAT IS THIS WHOLE THING WITH BAEKHYUN???? (ok can i put my shipping goggles on for some of these......? :D but but baekhyun makes my heart hurt. T^T)

THE WAY YOU PULL OUT THE CHARACTERIZATION OF THESE THREE WAS A+. CHEN. XD and him not always reading the situation that well and teasing baek! and of course mama who knows how baek must feel like. D:

OW can i say how much i loved the description of baek on the roof. ;;; it was just him there but somehow suho's comment about him and EVERYTHING you wrote there... i could immediately tell something was wrong. T_T POOR BB. ;;;; i MIGHT HAVE A FEELING WHO HAS BROKEN HIS HEART BY BEING DIFFERENT so they just _can't be together, for example cough cough, human pcy. and baek starving himself. D: BABYYYY. T____T ok now i'm all emotional and i want MORE OF THIS and i want to know more and asdfghjklö thank you???

This time Baekhyun really smiles at him, but it's a smile full of sadness.

"Because I'm an idiot with a broken heart."


._________________________. didn't help with this recent emo feeling.

THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU PLEASE WRITE MORE I LOVE THIS IDEA.