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SkySpider ([personal profile] skyspider) wrote in [community profile] writetomyheart2023-07-03 03:03 am

[Team Four] Don't Die

Only managed a random little snippet, hope that's okay!

Genshin Impact, Alhaitham/Kaveh, T, ~100 words
Final words: He wasn't entirely sure; everything had happened too quickly for him to process at the time.


"...won't forgive you if you die. Haitham, do you hear me? Alhaitham, open your fucking eyes!"

Kaveh sounded terrified, in a way that Alhaitham didn't often hear. He was emotional, often overdramatic… but not like this.

His chest hurt. No just in the sense of him struggling to breathe — although there was certainly that, too — but something sharper, like he'd been run through by a sword. In retrospect, that was probably a fairly accurate description of the source of pain he was experiencing. Though from Alhaitham's hazy recollections, it probably wasn't a sword so much as a stray shard of debris. He wasn't entirely sure; everything had happened too quickly for him to process at the time.


Will be pinging ecleclicat on Discord for their turn!
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[personal profile] scytale 2023-07-02 07:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooh, I like the mix of dreaminess and intellectualizing going on here, and this is very good whump! And love how he sneaks in a somewhat snide comment about Kaveh, in the midst of all of this He was emotional, often overdramatic… but not like this. -- but also how this underscores the angst and the fear!