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A bit late because of the holidays. A short continuation to my 50s kyomohoku au.
Taiga/Hokuto, PG-13ish?, 630 words
They left the jazz bar, and Hokuto followed Taiga into the narrow side streets of Shinjuku.
“I know a place,” Taiga had said.
The place turned out to be a shady looking western style hotel. It was on a dim side alley, and the lighted sign by the entrance listed the room prices by hours. To Hokuto it looked very suspicious but Taiga stepped in so confidently he had no choice but to follow.
“Wait for me here,” Taiga told him as they entered, leaving Hokuto in the hallway by an elevator while he walked in from a doorway that was covered by thick black curtains. The other returned mere minutes later, and gestured to Hokuto to step into the elevator.
“What is this place?” Hokuto asked as they rode up to the 8th floor. “This doesn’t look like an ordinary hotel.”
“No, it’s not,” Taiga agreed. “It’s designed especially for shorter visits like ours now. I’ve used it a couple of times and find it the most convenient.”
“Oh, I see.”
He’s used it a couple of times... Does it mean he’s come here with other men, too?
Hokuto’s stomach sank from the thought, though the rational side of him said it was ridiculous. Of course a man like Taiga would’ve had many suitors and lovers over the years, probably even now. It wasn’t like they were exclusive with this weird arrangement of theirs.
The dispiriting thoughts were pushed away from Hokuto’s mind when Taiga led him to their room and closed the door after. Hokuto walked in slowly, his shoes sinking slightly into the soft red carpet that covered the whole floor. The room was very western-like with its bright colors, ornamented wallpaper, framed mirror on the wall and a king size bed with thick pillows and duvet. The room looked almost as big as Hokuto’s whole apartment.
Taiga walked past him, shrugging off his jacket and throwing it on the small sofa that stood beside the bed. He turned towards Hokuto with a smile on his lips.
“Well, what do you think? Here no one will interrupt us.”
Hokuto’s throat was suddenly very dry, and his whole body tingled with anticipation and nervousness. Alone, finally alone with just the two of them.
”It’s nice,” he croaked and suddenly wished he’d have drunk more of that wine to calm his nerves.
Taiga’s smile was soft as he held out his hand, urging Hokuto to walk closer. Hokuto did, taking Taiga’s hand and letting the other man pull him close. He felt Taiga’s fingers on his temple, pushing aside stray strands and caressing his cheek.
”You seem a bit tense,” Taiga observed, voice hushed. ”Everything alright? We don’t have to rush with this, you know.”
”No,” Hokuto said instantly. He met Taiga’s eyes and took a deep, shaky breath.
”I’m alright. And I want this. I want you.”
Saying it out loud like that felt so foreign, yet liberating and arousing. Hokuto almost felt like bursting from the myriad of feelings storming inside him right then. He leaned closer to Taiga and tilted his head against Taiga’s hand that was still cradling his face. Slowly, Taiga ran a thumb along Hokuto’s bottom lip.
”What do you want me to do?”
“To—fuck me.”
Hokuto almost held his breath after uttering the words, observing Taiga’s expression. The other man’s eyes darkened, his gaze piercing and intense as he looked at Hokuto. Then he leaned in and kissed Hokuto slowly, deeply. And for the first time ever, Hokuto let himself fully succumb to the kiss, not having to worry about onlookers like when out in public.
Taiga tasted like the wine, and kissed him quite breathless before finally pulling away a little.
“Now, take off your clothes.”
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Taiga/Hokuto, PG-13ish?, 630 words
They left the jazz bar, and Hokuto followed Taiga into the narrow side streets of Shinjuku.
“I know a place,” Taiga had said.
The place turned out to be a shady looking western style hotel. It was on a dim side alley, and the lighted sign by the entrance listed the room prices by hours. To Hokuto it looked very suspicious but Taiga stepped in so confidently he had no choice but to follow.
“Wait for me here,” Taiga told him as they entered, leaving Hokuto in the hallway by an elevator while he walked in from a doorway that was covered by thick black curtains. The other returned mere minutes later, and gestured to Hokuto to step into the elevator.
“What is this place?” Hokuto asked as they rode up to the 8th floor. “This doesn’t look like an ordinary hotel.”
“No, it’s not,” Taiga agreed. “It’s designed especially for shorter visits like ours now. I’ve used it a couple of times and find it the most convenient.”
“Oh, I see.”
He’s used it a couple of times... Does it mean he’s come here with other men, too?
Hokuto’s stomach sank from the thought, though the rational side of him said it was ridiculous. Of course a man like Taiga would’ve had many suitors and lovers over the years, probably even now. It wasn’t like they were exclusive with this weird arrangement of theirs.
The dispiriting thoughts were pushed away from Hokuto’s mind when Taiga led him to their room and closed the door after. Hokuto walked in slowly, his shoes sinking slightly into the soft red carpet that covered the whole floor. The room was very western-like with its bright colors, ornamented wallpaper, framed mirror on the wall and a king size bed with thick pillows and duvet. The room looked almost as big as Hokuto’s whole apartment.
Taiga walked past him, shrugging off his jacket and throwing it on the small sofa that stood beside the bed. He turned towards Hokuto with a smile on his lips.
“Well, what do you think? Here no one will interrupt us.”
Hokuto’s throat was suddenly very dry, and his whole body tingled with anticipation and nervousness. Alone, finally alone with just the two of them.
”It’s nice,” he croaked and suddenly wished he’d have drunk more of that wine to calm his nerves.
Taiga’s smile was soft as he held out his hand, urging Hokuto to walk closer. Hokuto did, taking Taiga’s hand and letting the other man pull him close. He felt Taiga’s fingers on his temple, pushing aside stray strands and caressing his cheek.
”You seem a bit tense,” Taiga observed, voice hushed. ”Everything alright? We don’t have to rush with this, you know.”
”No,” Hokuto said instantly. He met Taiga’s eyes and took a deep, shaky breath.
”I’m alright. And I want this. I want you.”
Saying it out loud like that felt so foreign, yet liberating and arousing. Hokuto almost felt like bursting from the myriad of feelings storming inside him right then. He leaned closer to Taiga and tilted his head against Taiga’s hand that was still cradling his face. Slowly, Taiga ran a thumb along Hokuto’s bottom lip.
”What do you want me to do?”
“To—fuck me.”
Hokuto almost held his breath after uttering the words, observing Taiga’s expression. The other man’s eyes darkened, his gaze piercing and intense as he looked at Hokuto. Then he leaned in and kissed Hokuto slowly, deeply. And for the first time ever, Hokuto let himself fully succumb to the kiss, not having to worry about onlookers like when out in public.
Taiga tasted like the wine, and kissed him quite breathless before finally pulling away a little.
“Now, take off your clothes.”

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AAAAAA I'm so happy that you continued this fic!!!!😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
It’s just… SO HOT??? There's so much tension throughout the fic and I feel like I’m standing on my toes while reading waaahhhh!!!!!!
I really really like that it's not a new thing for Taiga to go to a love hotel! 👀 I LIKE that Hokuto felt a tinge of jealousy there because it's just soooo realistic and soooo him that he's feeling like that! I mean, the whole situation is weird and new to him and their arrangement isn't indeed anything exclusive or so, so everything is a little bit confusing. SUCH IS LIFE. (SUCH IS FUAN😙!!!)
The moment when they step inside but don't get into it right away AAAAAAAA THE TENSION nasnfaäsfäsaäfasäf I can't believe how well you managed to write that, I can only admire your skills (AND ENJOY THE RIDE)!!!🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🔥🔥🔥🔥
”You seem a bit tense,” Taiga observed, voice hushed. ”Everything alright? We don’t have to rush with this, you know.””No,” Hokuto said instantly. He met Taiga’s eyes and took a deep, shaky breath.”I’m alright. And I want this. I want you.”Saying it out loud like that felt so foreign, yet liberating and arousing. Hokuto almost felt like bursting from the myriad of feelings storming inside him right then. He leaned closer to Taiga and tilted his head against Taiga’s hand that was still cradling his face. Slowly, Taiga ran a thumb along Hokuto’s bottom lip.”What do you want me to do?”“To—fuck me.”
This whole part HOLYYYYY🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯 Especially Hokuto requesting Taiga to fuck him HMMMM HELLO YEEEEES OMGGGGGGGG MY MIND JUST WENT BLANK THANK YOU VERY MUCH
And then they're kissing and äaslfäläasfmläaflmäsamälf it's so bittersweet in a way because they can finally do it in peace without any interruption and aaahhhh it's so hottttt! Kyomohoku kissing deeply and asflänasäfnsafläalfä did I say that this mental image is too hot for my brain????
The ending asöföfasäfnasn why did it remind me of Heated Rivalry a little bit asdfghh!!! But yeeeeees take off your clothes please 8))) BUT OFC YOU ENDED IT THERE AND LEFT ME HANGING, that's almost cruel!!! XD But nevertheless, I'm still so happy that you continued writing this because this AU is just soooo good and aäsfälaälfläafnlsäanfna HOT HOT HOT and I live for this so THANK YOUUU🥰🥰🥰🥰 Now excuse me, I'll go and re-read this one more time...